WC: The inverted Temple 7-12

Well, this is the last section of my audition for 

I'm a little mad at myself, this could be better writing wise, but i am pleased with the art overall, despite having to resort to grey scale. The splash page at the end it to fill the criteria that your character MUST be seen to be in the city (which if I was sensible i would have checked sooner)

Anyway fingers crossed.
 (note to self be less indecisive about scripts!)
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